The shot panning up the rocket and relieving the dying Earth and busy Moon wasn't really doing what I thought it really should. I kinda imagined the shot to show a busy Moon but it didn't, it just seemed dead. I've done a little test below and added some sky traffic just to see if that might add a little something to make you feel something is going on. Let me know if you think it adds something. Maybe even a little more might help too?